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REVEALING
SUBTEXT
A Program by Hal
Croasmun
A great script operates on multiple levels and the "story
beneath the story" is as least as real and powerful as the surface
story. For many readers and producers, a script without depth
gets a potentially career-ending "pass."
WHAT IS SUBTEXT?
Subtext shows up in internal conflicts, plots, misplaced
emotions and schemes. But subtext goes much further in a great
script. Instead of being petty, the subtext of a story can be
the most important part of the story. The audience perceives the
deeper levels of the story and that becomes their internal journey,
the journey they came to the movie theater for.
Subtext can be shown through plot, character, relationships,
scene design, symbols, action, and dialogue. It tells the "unspoken
story" of a script or the "story beneath the story." Many times,
it is what has us feel that a story is real.
THE PROBLEM?
When a script is void of subtext, it has no depth. It comes
off as superficial. Lack of depth is one of the top complaints
that Hollywood production companies make about scripts sent to
them. But there is a solution.
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"This program gave me
a concrete and substantial method for incorporating subtext
that I can know for sure is subtext, and not have to guess
when I'm being on-the-nose or not."
- Jason Rodriguez
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THERE IS A SOLUTION. WOULD YOU LIKE...?
- Multiple layers of reality
in your script?
- Characters that have depth
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- A multi-layered plot that deeply
engages the reader?
- Dialogue that delivers deeper
meaning and sometimes multiple levels of meaning?
- To be able to discover and
write subtext at will, instead of having subtext show up haphazardly
in your script?
Revealing Subtext is designed to give you a complete understanding
of subtext and how to apply it to your own script. It's not a
theory class. It's a "write scripts with satisfying subtext from
now on" class. And it is guaranteed.
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"I saw immediate change
in my writing technique...Applying your subtext approach
instantly revealed how quickly my writing could grow.
It's been an amazing journey up those Ten Subtext Assignments
Steps!"
-Suzye Marino
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As you read through the days of the program, imagine what
your writing would be like if you were proficient at each of these
essential subtext skills.
STRUCTURE OF EACH PROGRAM
For ten days, we'll focus on subtext. Each day, you'll
receive a lesson via email, along with an assignment for that
day. The lessons give concise explanations of an important component
of the subtext puzzle along with examples from popular movies.
The assignments give you a chance to put your new understanding
into practice, transferring the techniques from information to
experience.
REVEALING SUBTEXT
- Structures for Deeper Meaning
TBA
$85.00 USD
Limited to 20 people.
Enroll Now
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In this program, you'll be introduced to a series of
structures that naturally cause subtext to occur in your
writing.
- Day One: Understanding subtext
and its revelation
- Day Two: Designing Plots for Subtext
- Day Three: Designing Characters
for Subtext
- Day Four: Designing Scenes for Subtext
- Day Five: Designing Relationships
for Subtext
- Day Six: Symbols as Subtext
- Day Seven: The Cover-Up
- Day Eight: Language Patterns of
Subtext
- Day Nine: Multiple Meanings
- Day Ten: Applying Subtext to Your
Script
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For an excellent example of subtext, see the analysis of
the first three pages of AS GOOD AS IT GETS
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"The difference in my
writing has been phenomenal. I've been learning to be
a writer for as long as I can remember. Thanks to this
series of courses, I'm finally realizing the level I believed
I was capable of, but couldn't quite achieve before.
I would recommend any of Hal's classes
to any writer who's serious about their craft."
-Judy Mills
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100% Guarantee
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We're so confident that you'll
love this program that we make this guarantee.
If after the first three
days, you don't feel like this program is worth it, we will
refund your money in full.
To receive a refund, you
must pay for the program in advance. If you feel the course
does not meet your expectations, email us at the end of
the third day and your money will be refunded through PayPal.
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"How I wish I'd found
your course seven years ago when I wrote my first screenplay."
-Suzye Marino
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